A couple of days ago I was doing research on this subreddit about how to make a good Ad and hit pain points for customers. This is for my card game Capital Punishment: The party argument game. One of the critiques I received from the onset was that people wouldn’t be able to see how a party argument could be fun. I took this criticism quite literally and decided to make this video https://drive.google.com/file/d/1nkKURStJcLqSw7W4vWfe5wZM9BVAeWfz/view?usp=drivesdk
I was hoping to receive some feedback aside how terrible the actual editing is. I planned on using this format to promote my game on Instagram as the content is always original and hilarious and never the same.
Tl;dr: how can I make my video ad concept better?